Some people believe that traveling with in a city is better by a car while other think bicycle is better means. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In todays world, technology advancement increasing at very fast paced. Modernity in vehicles change the priorities of the people. Number of people believe that travelling in city by owner private cars is better.
However
, others think that bicycles are the best mode of transport within cities. In
this
essay, I examine both the views in detail and put forward evidence why I support the latter perspective.
First
of all, people have hectic scheduled throughout days and they do not have enough
time
to reach destination on
time
.
In addition
, work place or colleges are far away from hometown, So to reach their own
bicycle
is quite difficult. People have to reach there by the allotted
time
, but due to traffic congestion and the public transport facilities are getting worst day by day.
For instance
, the person who travels by bus or train have to wait for a long period of
time
and even do not get space for seating or else there is a huge crowd. Another reason is that, travelling by cars is more comfortable and fastest way to reach at the decided place on
time
. Even they can relax by themselves listening music and many other features designed into cars.
For instance
, on
time
family member can go through cars rather than roam in the city to reach at their destination.
However
, we all know that the car's fuel is harmful to the environment and
also
to the human being. There are few people who prefer to travel use
bicycle
to ride on the street or the nearest place.
For example
, most people ride by
bicycle
to the grocery stores and medicals which is near to the home. Most of them are not aware about the benefits due to
bicycle
ride, because there are advantages
such
as helping reduce the risk of heart stroke, solve obesity problem and increase blood pressure. The bike does not need too much effort and even cycle is pollution free.
For instance
, my neighbourhood uncle always prefers to use
bicycle
Suggestion
bicycles
a bicycle
and his age above 50 till date he does not have any health problem. In conclusion, some think cars are more preferable among the people, but others believe that
bicycle
Suggestion
the bicycle
has more pros than cons.
However
, I personally that use the mode of transportation on the basis of the destination distance.
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