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Perseverance helps fight all challenges in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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To overcome all challenges and obstacles in
life
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life, perseverance
perseverance
 helps us.
Perseverance
 is not giving up, it is an effort required to do something and keep doing till the end, even if it's hard. I partially agree with
this
 statement as only
perseverance
 cannot help to cope up with all battle in
life
. In
life
 to get a success there are three main basic requirements is resilience, determination and
perseverance
, without all three, successor to struggle all obstacles in
life
 is not effective. Even though
perseverance
 is determined to keep on going in the face of setbacks and challenges. It is that inner drive that keeps you in the game when everything else says it's time to quit.
Perseverance
 helps to stay powerful to follow through and effort till the end to achieve the goals, dreams and vision in
life
. With the help of
perseverance
 we cannot tackle all the challenges in
life
. Merely
perseverance
 is not enough for assistance to do the work.
For example
, to set up a business, a person needs a determination, resilience and
perseverance
, efforts to set a business in a market. Only
perseverance
 does not maintain the whole structure. Undoubtedly,
perseverance
 keeps personally motivated to work out daily and gives a great sense of satisfaction, but only
perseverance
 cannot helpfully achieve target. To conclude, to maintain the balance in
life preseverance
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life, perseverance
life perseverance
 can help us, but it does not help to meet all challenges and hurdles. There are two more things require to get success in
life
, it is resilience and determination.
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