Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Throughout history, the cases concerning environment h
as been maintaining
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have been maintaining
one of the most considerable p
roblem
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problems
for both earth and humanity due to the lack of sufficient judgment of authorities against responsible faces for causing
this
catastrophe is argued by e
normous number
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the enormous number
an enormous number
of people. As far as I observe, I extremely support
this
opinion and, in
this
essay, will be demonstrated arguments with specific illustrations.
To begin
with, even though challenging occurrence of global w
arming governments
Accept comma addition
warming, governments
are not willing to take noticeable attempts to prevent d
amages
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damage
and pollutions that caused by facilities or fabrics. It is obvious and indicated by Pioneer of universal communities’ experts that administrators of countries avoid from resorting to convincing fines or owing to being stuck to h
uge contribution
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a huge contribution
huge contributions
from these establishments bringing to their economical consistency.
For instance
, corporations which have been proved to be damaging the natural life of Turkish forests cannot be issued on media sources in order to not encourage citizens to riot against the indifference of responsible rulers.
On the other hand
, I’m completely aware of the fact that if authorized individuals of administration could have opposed to these irregular emergence and production of giant institutions by imposing against them the constitutional laws and comply with justice, only a minority number of facilities would withstand penalties.
Furthermore
, w
idespread efficiency
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the widespread efficiency
of governments cannot be ignored by any individual or employer not taking into consideration. To illustrate, in recent years, the best sample of
this
method took place in Russia by the ruler Putin.
As a result
of environmental damages of private companies, Putin had to w
arned
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warn
them.
However
, several employers objected to threats of him and as a consequence encountered with concrete consequences of action of laws generated by the order of P
resident.
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the President
In conclusion, even though particular governments resist to take precaution against facilities in order to preclude them from pollution of e
nvironment,
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the environment
they are the most capable establishments to cope with
this
disaster.

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