The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries; others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Aging is natural in the

life

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on

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of

human being

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a human being

. Many countries take policies to keep their population in

god

benefit

good

health as long as possible. The

development

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of Medicine increase the

life

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of humans,

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many people across the world can get strong and long

life

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. Some people think that

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fact could reduce the resources for the coming generation, but others think that it can be very important for us to build a strong society. After

analyze

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analysing

analyse

these two versions, we will give our point of view. The increasing of the older people can provoke some issues on demographics stabilization and in the management of financial resources.

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, the increasing of order people could cause

problem

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a problem

problems

for the

government

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to drain some grant and founds to strategical plan for the

development

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of

strategical

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strategic

field.

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as education, intelligence and infrastructures. In fact, view the high number of older people the governments are

oblige

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obligated

obliged

to take

care

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of them, by creating particular infrastructures and assign Doctors and Nurses to take

care

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of them.

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Then, if

the number of older people is constantly increasing, the

government

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will be

oblige

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obliged

obligated

to assign

consequent

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consequences

, considerable financial resources. These resources could be assigned to educational or industry sectors.

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, in

one

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country if the older peoples increased and we have a baby boom (an increasing of births) the

government

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will be face of serious demographic issues.

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increasing all the population will oblige the

government

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to increase the public incomes.

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could lead to augment the taxes. The older people could not work as the

youngers

used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father

younger

one

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.

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, those who work will be imposed to take

care

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of older persons. In a different

mind spirit

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mind, spirit

, some people think that the increasing of older people is important for a society. We can understand them in tree points.

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, it is very natural to keep a population healthier.

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is what which makes us human. It is the core root of human being. In Africa,

one

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quote says that “if you want to

kwon

be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about

know

the humanity of on

nation

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the nation

, look if they take

care

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of the older people”.

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, the increasing of older people

means

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mean

that the health

policies

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policy

works.

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an important indicator for a good

development

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. In Africa, we consider that older people can be

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considered

as a library. The

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but not the least, we need older people to teach wisdom to the coming generation. Older people have lived

life

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experiences, which

can be teach

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can be taught

to young people.

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they will be prepared to tackle the challenges of their generation We deeply believed that, the increasing of

the older

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older

people is a good signal of human

development

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. Even if, certain issues

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demographic and financial restrictions could

occurred

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occur

, some solutions can be used to

fixe

restore by replacing a part or putting together what is torn or broken

fix

them. Legal immigration of young people is

one

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of the solutions. People will naturally pass away.

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, we do not have to stress ourselves on the availability of resources. Cooperation between nation and fair trade could be the strongest solutions to overcome the problems caused by the increasing of older people.