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Compare and contrast how young people in your country spend their free time nowadays to how their parents used to when they were young. You should write at least 250 words.

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The definition of "free
time
" has been transformed as
time
 passes. The
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 of our young generations in free
time
are
Suggestion
is
 quite different from the adult generation because of the available services and kinds of stuff. The purpose of
this
 essay is to compare the differences between young and adult.
First
 of all, one of the most common activities for parent generations is that doing sports or something like those exercises. According to the general survey, old children had superior physical abilities than recent children because they were doing sports a lot. What is more, as far as I know, almost all of them were likely to participate in at least one sport even though modern children have not
such
 a tendency. The other popular activity associated with the child in the old generation is reading books more than recent people. It is obvious that the publishing industry is a downward trend, and the sales figure for books has been decreasing at an alarming rate. According to
this
, it can be guessed that modern children prefer electric books to paper books.
On the other hand
, virtually modern young people are keen on video games. As technological advances, the many sorts of game machines were released, and the qualities of them have been increased more and more.
Therefore
, the growing number of people addicted to a variety of games.
Besides
 sightseeing. With the development of transport and tourism, people are easy to access to tourist destinations even foreign countries. The road infrastructure is developing and the trains
are connected
Suggestion
connect
 to national scales. The fees are much cheaper than the old ones. In conclusion, what to do in free
time
 has been replaced due to the development of countries. There is no easy answer to which is better. I think modern children are easy to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their appetites because they can gain almost everything, and they can do whatever they would like to.
However
, relying on technology probably exerts a harmful effect on their health.
Therefore
, it is clear that
old
Suggestion
older
 children were healthier than recent children.
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