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Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays
,
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,
the
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 market has now become extremely competitive.Companies are looking not only for
craftsmen but
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craftsmen, but
also
 for socially active workers.In the initial stages of selection and in the interview itself, special attention is paid to social
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 and managerial skills for a particular position.
This
 essay will
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 the reasons for
this
 change in the selection criteria.
Firstly
,
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,
social skills
are
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is
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initially
 on the foundation for having positive relationships with colleagues.People with poor social skills will not be able to connect with people correctly.
As a result
, it will be difficult for them to meet new people and expand their horizons.
Secondly
,
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,
teamwork is extremely useful and necessary for the success of the company, attracting
investment
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investors
 and sponsors,
therefore
 the owners of the company pay special attention to the communication skills necessary to communicate with other team members.Human interaction in the workplace involves team production, with workers playing off of each other’s strengths and adapting flexibly to changing circumstances.
In addition
, if the ability to work with some kind of program can be learned in a few months, social skills take a very long time to develop. In conclusion, since social skills
are no less important than other abilities companies always pay
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always no less important than other abilities companies pay
are no less important than other abilities companies always paying
are no less important than other abilities companies always paid
are no less important than other abilities companies always pay
 great attention to finding employees with
such
 skills.
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