The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?

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The unprecedented rise of natural resources ' exploitation
are
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is
more likely to pose a threat to our life to some extent.
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of all,
this
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overexpolitation
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could
catalyze
change by catalysis or cause to catalyze
catalyse
the deplete of natural resources in the near forthcoming future due to the lack of time to replenish and thrive.
As a result
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, there is a great likelihood that the
next
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generation would face with the severe shortage of
this
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kind of resource, bringing a
delibitating
impairing the strength and vitality
debilitating
impact not only
on
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for
to
human life but
also
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the economy.
For instance
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, at the risk of
scarity
a small and inadequate amount
scarcity
security
of oil owing to the excessive and uncontrolled harness, the national economy of a particular country might suffer oil crisis as the majority of machines and equipments are run by
this
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traditional energy. As regards the influence on
ecosystem
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ecosystems
,
this
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tendency could be considered as one of the
cupablel
(usually followed by 'of') having capacity or ability
capable
factor leading to the acceleration of the
deterioratio
a symptom of reduced quality or strength
deterioration
. As a matter of fact that deforestation and
inferile
incapable of reproducing
infertile
land in various regions on over the world
have been recieved
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have been receiving
have been received
more public attention nowadays.
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some aspects could be suggested as perilous consequences, there are several measures to tackle
this
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phenomenon.
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and foremost, raising individuals' awareness
shoud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
be high on
agenda
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the agenda
, because modifications are usually
inextricately
in an inextricable manner
inextricably
interwoven with education.
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, in order to deter people from illicitly exploiting, it is crucial to enforce a regulation or law which imposes a
heavily
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heavy
fine
to
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on
those who violate. The stricter the law is, the less likely that people infringe.
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but not least, the
implemetation
the act of accomplishing some aim or executing some order
implementation
of the recovering programme is
actuall
in actual fact
actually
effective to preserve natural resources.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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