In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about this?

The criminal activities Is the biggest concern in today's era. In most of the countries the date of crime rates is on thrive and these acts are becoming more savage rapidly,

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however, there

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a lot factors that are influencing the criminal activities. By considering facts I will discuss the reasons and of course some steps we can take to mitigate the

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in the essay below. To start with, the main cause of law breaking activities is illiteracy people who are uneducated cannot think about any right and wrong doings and can be easily distorted owing to their weakness which make them indulge in the kinds of misdeeds.

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, there are societies who are unemployed but they are under extreme pressure to serve their families and of course when hunger exceed the limit of their patience turns them into an acoustical phase

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the young children who spend most of the time with their friends rather than families get involved themselves in the acts of vandalism and voyeurism which later on ends with the criminal offences.

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, there is always a solution to a

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problem but

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problem, but

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is possible only when both government and societies equally participate to handle

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issue. On the

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hand government should provide education to the people who can not afford they should be taught about the causes and effects of any misdoing and of course each and every person should be treated equally to the groups

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, parents should give an extra care to their children at their young ages so that they can spend more time with them rather than their friends. In conclusion, the causes of enhancement in crime rates are much more effective, but with appropriate steps

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can be taken care but both individuals and governments should act positively to face

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and to deal

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issue.