"Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?"

There is a stereotype believed by masses that having property is a crucial factor to define how much an individual is successful. In my opinion, there are
also
other aspects that should be taken into account while measuring the
success
of people. It is considered that being wealthy denotes that a person has worked properly and eventually has an opportunity to possess expensive luxuries and belongings.
For instance
, world famous entrepreneurs,
such
as Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg best epitomize
this
image, because while they took their
first
steps on the way to
success
, they gained a significant amount of money.
However
, fate and luck
also
play a vital role in human life because a person can strive to accomplish his/her goal and an unexpected accident can occur to disrupt all the effort.   
Success
 always cannot be measured via bank account and it depends on how people acquire the meaning. Every individual has own lifelong
intention
Suggestion
intending
to be satisfied with personal life and it is manifest that not everyone is able to get it. Happiness and satisfaction are the most elusive things that human beings have been
endeavoring
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavouring
to attain. Money surely has the ability to make a person well-known throughout the world, whereas making people successful is under the question.
For example
, an employee works in a lower-paid job and the salary is enough to support the family and he/she found how to be pleased, which is a real
success
.   By way of conclusion, money is not an essential factor to measure the
success
because money does not always give happiness. Being happy and satisfied are of utmost importance to be successful in life.
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