The two maps illustrates the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012

The two diagrams show the construction innovation of a school campus from 1985 to 2012. In general, it can be seen that the changes involved the addition of several infrastructures as well as the growth in student number.
To begin
with, there were 1500 students attending the school in 1985 and in 2012, the total number of pupils went up by 800 students after the innovation.
In addition
, in 1985, the Southern area was nearly fully covered by a playing field, but 27 years later, the playing field was narrowed down to make room for a swimming pool and a fitness club.
Furthermore
, back in 1985, the school had only a 2-storey block situated in the west, but in 2012, one more story was added to the original classroom block and more classrooms were built to accommodate a larger quantity of students.
Moreover
, in 1985, in the northeast of the campus, there were an office and a library. After the period of 27 years, the office still remained but the library was transformed into computer room.
Also
, there were two parking areas in 1985 but comparing to the past, the larger one which was in the North was reconstructed to a new one with semicircle shape and the smaller car park was demolished to grow trees.

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