Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in many subcontinental countries.What do you think are the reasons behind this?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are
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anadatory
required by rule
mandatory
for every c
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child
with their c
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an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
but among all sports
cricket
is the limelight
game
considered in the some regions. In my opinion, it is an acceptable affirmation, which has some few general
r
eason
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reasons
behind
this
of one side choice by the followers. To embark with, my prior issues behind
this
game
is that, a huge budget h
old
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holds
by
cricket
, so that renowned companies easily make their interest to invest in it.
Moreover
, g
lamrous
having an air of allure, romance and excitement
glamorous
world i
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in value
into it, due to e
xpensive place
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expensive places
an expensive place
and equipment has been u
sining
changing for the worse
worsening
for it as well as top models p
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contribute to the progress or growth of
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promoted
this
whole stuff.
For instance
, every year
cricket
a
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associations, agencies
associations agency
associations agency agency
has been b
iding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
their player in million dollars,
hence
they display
this
game
more attractive and curious way, so that gain more fans.
This
is the
reason
why more and more people like to watch
this
game
among a
nothers.
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
Furthermore
, another
reason
in
this
game
for luring that children find their scope in that activity, because, in
this
game
players as well as coach has by big cheques
,s
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,
o that they showed their status towards teenager,
consequently
, they want to become
c
ricket player
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a cricket player
rather than choosing their interesting fields. F
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To
illustrate, during a school in India 60 percent students gave same
reason
,
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Accept space
,
n the question of why they liked
cricket
in 2004 at USA.
Therefore
, youth has followed their lifestyle. To conclude, observing all factors
finally
decided the main issue has been rising that spotlight productions organization changed the scenario of
this
game
with money and
also
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the expectation
of youth to become r
age
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a rage
the rage
to richest significantly rising the list of fan following day by day.

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