Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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health
has become a major concern for various groups, governments and related organizations. While some people prefer to increase excercises
through providing public facilities Suggestion
exercise
exercises
such
as sports centres.
many
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,
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health
is to make sports centers
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centres
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the country
health
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
Health
centers
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loose
involve
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involved
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. They are any specific behavior
activities
use
to play indoor games and they are using Suggestion
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using
usable
useable
advance
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advanced
techology
as the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
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. (often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
Modren
technology has made out life much easier. used of a living language; being the current stage in its development
Modern
people
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can performs
their duties on advance gadgets they don't need to go out to fulfil their duties. Suggestion
can perform
some
people use to do exercises at home without any public Suggestion
Some
facilitiy
. They do jogging and walk in local parks. a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facility
facilities
some
people don't like to do exercise Suggestion
Some
Rather they
have public facilities so it's their choice.
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health
health
of people. Many people have lost their right tracks they have addicted
to harmful drugs like Suggestion
have been addicted
somking
and drinking. So, to make public the act of smoking tobacco or other substances
smoking
health
sectors would not be enough for the addicted peoples
. Government should provide them righteous Suggestion
people
guidence
to astray people. It's better to guide people from something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
guidance
secondry
school. They would be aware being of second rank or importance or value; not direct or immediate
secondary
from
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of
andy
harmful thing which can be effected from their one or some or every or all without specification
any
health
.
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should make Suggestion
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organizations and unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
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to provide righteous a race between candidates for elective office
campaigns
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guidelines
guideline
astrays
. To make a receptacle for the ash from smokers' cigars or cigarettes
ashtrays
as trays
health
organizations would beneficial for those people who just want to improve their lifestyle and make theirself
fit. Suggestion
their self
Excissive
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Excessive
alchol
consumption is still a social problem, and a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent
alcohol
government
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the government
are now complaning
that obesity related Suggestion
is now complaining
are now complaining
health
conditions. The biggest task is to impoove
those people lifestyle to make better
improve
empower
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are not aware or addicted from drugs. We should inform them that excessive use of fast food is dangerousfor
their Suggestion
dangerous for
health
as well.
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guideline
guidelines
to
those people who are astray and not aware Suggestion
for
from
necessary Suggestion
of
health
education. The mandartory
step is to Educate these people required by rule
mandatory
first
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first, then
then
, focuse
on other the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
focused
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and sports centers
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centre
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