The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the rate of the pollutants
which
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waste
by three different companies from 2000 to 2015, signing every
five year
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change.
Overall
, in the millennium, A
company
produced more than approximately 3 and 9
tonnes
waste
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of waste
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materials, than
B
and A companies, respectively. Over the
years
, A
company
's pollutants dramatically decreased. The most fluctuating altering was in
B
company
.
In there
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, after
the
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2000, the
waste
production rose
up
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by
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nearly 3
tonnes
,
although
between the
years
2005 and
2015
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,2015
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this
type of
waste
significantly alleviated.
On the contrary
,
company
C manufactured
waste
by an increasing trend,
following
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over
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the
years
. In
the
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2015, it released more than 10
tonnes
, by far the
second
waste
material after 2005.
In addition
,
B
company
had given
to
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the
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nature at least
waste
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a waste
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product in 2015, it had just 3
tonnes
. Fortunately, A
company
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company's
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waste
production has still reduced in the
last
years
. It had dropped approximately 8
tonnes
. Eventually, companies A and
B
could not
waste
like
as
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another one.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, tonnes, b, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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