IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#computers #education #people #trend #consequences
The
use
 of computers as an educational tool is increasing at an unprecedented rate. Some believe that the
use
 of computers in
education
 is a positive trend while others disagree. Both sides of
this
 argument will be analysed in the essay before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. On the one hand, with the advancements in artificial intelligence computers are able to teach and even assess language skills of individuals.
For example
, the Pearson Test of English uses highly sophisticated technology to judge the speaking and writing prowess of test takers.
This
 has not only reduced the cost of administering the
test but
Accept comma addition
test, but
also
 eliminated the human factor from the evaluation process.
Therefore
, it is understandable why many people view increasing
use
 of computer in
education
 as a positive trend.
On the other hand
, the ever increasing
use
 of computer in
education
 can lead to lesser human interactions between teachers and students.
For instance
, many colleges now offer pre-recorded video lectures
instead
 of live lectures. Since
such
 an arrangement cannot accommodate back and forth questions and answers between teachers and pupils, numerous learning difficulties can arise
as a result
. Obviously, there are some disadvantages / drawbacks to the increasing
use
 of computers in
education
.
However
, these disadvantages pale in comparison to the advantages of using computers in
education
.
Although
 there are valid arguments on both sides, I personally believe that the rising
use
 of computers and artificial intelligence in
education
 is a positive phenomenon. It is safe to assume that in the future computers will play an even bigger role in
education
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: