Some people believe the purpose of prison is to punish, while others would argue that rehabilitation is its primary role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A number of community think that the purpose of jail is to give
punishment
, whereas some argues that the act of training after imprisonment plays a vital role. In this
essay I will discuss both sides of opinion.
Imprisonment is the most common punishment
these days to improve the rules and regulation implemented by the governing bodies.For example
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such
as murder, robbery,
drug smuggling, frauds, physical and verbal abuse are getting more on in different parts of the world. So, there must be a strict control for Accept space
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such
acts because it can really harm an individual life. However
, it's necessary to control on such
acts by giving strict punishment
to the person
involved in such
crimes.For instance
, Saudia Arabia has kept a very strict law of cutting the thieves
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regulations, we
can not
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US And UK there are specific rehabilitation centres where a Accept space
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person
can be taught for not doing such
acts in future. But, there is no such
guarantee for the repetition of crime by the same individual.Another disadvantage is during this
rehabilitation time period a person
mental health is suffering Suggestion
person's
aswell
.A plethora of people can go in depression, anxiety and insomnia due to which they are consuming different antipsychotic drugs to relax themselves.
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the strict punishment
punishment
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of
person
will think hundred times before doing any criminal act.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite