Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Computers are
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, they are excessively used in daily routine which includes our profession, enjoyment and even for entertainment. In my opinion, Information Technology has many is good for society. Let's discuss about its merits and demerits.
Firstly
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, Information Technology as decreased the distance between people,
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, by
video calling
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video, calling
anybody can see and talk to a person who is miles away from them.
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, it has
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decreased load from human in day to day working like in factories or multinational companies.
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, IT sector has
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provided applications for doing everything,
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for talking with any person,
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for ordering food
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book my show for booking tickets for a movie etc.
On the contrary
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, the Machines are replacing humans from their work
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increasing, laying off of employees as machines are more affective. In the conclusion, Computers are beneficial for society and
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ave many merits against its demerits
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