some people say that every human being can create art,for example painting.others think only the people born with the ability can create art.discuss both views and give your opinion ?

Firstly
, I agree with the former one. In my opinion, everybody has her or his own ability, which contains unlimited potential that can make gorgeous artworks. If someone is educated well and the tutor gives a proper way,
then
she or he can be a good artist. And let me talk about the letter one. Those who insist that born with the ability is more important are the type that saw some cases that some artists make good artworks without good learning from good teachers. Still, there are more cases being great artists with hard works and proper education. Plus, I think those who couldn't be educated well could be more great artists if she or he had educated well. In conclusion, I think educated, well is a more important factor than bore with the ability.
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