Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others that think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?
Advancing
economy
is one of indications that is
to describe a country
's success
. However
, I think how live the citizens in the country
is as important as economy
, because some of countries have been grown
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growing
ec
onomy meanwhile,
they have a big gap between rich and poor people.
I describe two factors about a Accept comma addition
economy, meanwhile
country
's success
instead
of growing
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the growing economy
a growing economy
growing economies
economy
. Fi
rst
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The first factor
factor
is an average length of life. That is
expressed how a
superior medical treatment and how beAccept comma addition
expressed, how
w
ell-being people are in that Suggestion
is
country
. For example
, in one of the states in U.S., they have to pay a tax for an obesity. They promote how a first
food and oily cuisines affect to body.
It would know how the politics care about their health. Being a health is one of imSuggestion
the body
portant factors f
or progressing a Suggestion
the important factors
country
.
Se
cond
Suggestion
The second factor
A second factor
factor
is a level of happiness of citizens. It is assessed about whether the place is safe, a livable country
and supply a good education for children. I believe that if the people would like to live there, that country
supposed to be su
ccess b
ecause the people sustain a Suggestion
successful
country
. For example
, Finland is known as a very high level of contentment. They could demand a good social security and a good quality education. Supplying a good social security means to be made into an institution of medical treatments.
In conclusion, I think that a level of happiness of citizens is the most important factor
for meeting with success
. A country
is created by the citizens
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citizens, therefore
therefore
their satisfaction is necessary
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a necessary factor
factor
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