Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others that think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

Advancing

economy

is one of indications

that is

to describe a

country

's

success

.

However

, I think how live the citizens in the

country

is as important as

economy

, because some of countries have been gr

own

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growing

ec

onomy meanwhile,

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economy, meanwhile

they have a big gap between rich and poor people. I describe two factors about a

country

's

success

instead

of gr

owing

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the growing economy

a growing economy

growing economies

economy

.

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The first factor

factor

is an average length of life.

That is

ex

pressed how a

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expressed, how

superior medical treatment and how be

w

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is

ell-being people are in that

country

.

For example

, in one of the states in U.S., they have to pay a tax for an obesity. They promote how a

first

food and oily cuisines affect to bo

dy.

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the body

It would know how the politics care about their health. Being a health is one of im

portant factors f

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the important factors

or progressing a

country

.

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cond

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The second factor

A second factor

factor

is a level of happiness of citizens. It is assessed about whether the place is safe, a livable

country

and supply a good education for children. I believe that if the people would like to live there, that

country

supposed to be

su

ccess b

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successful

ecause the people sustain a

country

.

For example

, Finland is known as a very high level of contentment. They could demand a good social security and a good quality education. Supplying a good social security means to be made into an institution of medical treatments. In conclusion, I think that a level of happiness of citizens is the most important

factor

for meeting with

success

. A

country

is created by the ci

tizens

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citizens, therefore

therefore

their satisfaction is ne

cessary

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a necessary factor

factor

.