Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others that think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

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to describe a

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success

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growing

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economy, meanwhile

they have a big gap between rich and poor people. I describe two factors about a

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success

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the growing economy

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is an average length of life.

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ell-being people are in that

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the body

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the important factors

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is a level of happiness of citizens. It is assessed about whether the place is safe, a livable

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and supply a good education for children. I believe that if the people would like to live there, that

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supposed to be

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successful

ecause the people sustain a

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, Finland is known as a very high level of contentment. They could demand a good social security and a good quality education. Supplying a good social security means to be made into an institution of medical treatments. In conclusion, I think that a level of happiness of citizens is the most important

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is created by the ci

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