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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Since
tourism
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 is expanding and there more and more traveller going around the world
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 it is believed that the
tourism
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
nodes
 are causing damages to local cultures and
environment
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the environment
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,
 and
this
 problem often to be ignored
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This
 statement
can be agree
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can be agreed
 for some reason
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Firstly
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,
 local cultures
are often replaced
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is often replaced
 by many
outsiders
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outsider
 cultures in case to match with the taste and the habit of the outsiders
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,
for example
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 in some remote
area
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 in order to make tourist get used to the destination
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 they build café to match the incomers during the vacation
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 Because of
this
 problem
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 it will slowly cause the disappearance of the originality on the travel destination
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 which is damaging the cultures in
certain
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certain areas
a certain area
area
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Besides
 that
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,
 environment are
also
 often damaged to make the travel destination
more comfy
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more comfortable
 and exciting in order to attract more incomers for
economics purpose
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economics, purpose
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such
 as
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 forests are often cut down in some villages to build hospitality places and recreation
area
 like five-star hotel or theme park to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the requirement for travellers
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 and
this
 action is often taken without being considered if the effect will make a big deal to all over the village
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 In conclusion
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,
 local cultures and
environment
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environments
the environment
 are often damaged
in
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on
 purpose to make the
growing
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growth
 of
tourism
 in
specific
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specific areas
a specific area
area
 and to
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 the economy of the
tourism
 without considering the effect
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