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Nowadays parents are delaying childbirth when compared to olden days. Why is this? Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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 day and age, the infant birth rate has greatly declined in modern society. More and more people have changed their mind, having a baby of their life. These days, the majority of parents are delaying childbirth with compared to the past. In my perspective, I totally agree
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 premise for several reasons
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 and foremost, parents do not ready to be financially before they have their children. Taking care of the baby has a considerably spent money,
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 as milk, clothes and nappy, even toys.
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, if they are steadily growing, parents put on the pressure to raise a their own child with their wage that it is not enough for spending their living expense. On top of that, female are possibly able to work freely.
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 is because that many women
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 could have an opportunity to study at school if they want to rather than doing household chores.
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, even if elder people admire to learn the academic knowledge, society atmosphere would not generally provide a chance, which mean women are unable to learn the education because doing the housework is the more important part, back
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, it is completely altered people conscious due to be lessened gender discrimination at present. For these reasons, females might choose to study or working as they wish a great career woman. In a nutshell, there are a lot of pros rather than the cons like women, could lead to be far free their lives without giving up their dream.
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