Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge negative impacts on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The trend

of using social media,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

Facebook, is increasing nowadays.

However

, a big portion of society propagates that it has very detrimental effects on

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the community

along with individuals. I partially disagree with given statement, as its contrary aspects cannot be ignored as well. Let us discuss both aspects in the coming paragraphs. On one hand, social sites provide many benefits to both society and

individual person

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individual persons

individual people

the individual person

. On individuals -

First

of all, it helps one to do group studies online with experts. Many English coaching groups are there on Facebook which helps individuals to learn with overseas tutors and interact with native speakers without any hesitation.

Next

is, people can expand their business by advertising about their products and details on Facebook. By

this

, many people will see their products which in turn do marketing and give profits to them

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On community- social media

provides

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provide

information around the globe and make people aware with their surroundings. To illustrate, nowadays, outburst of COVID-19 made people home

arrest but

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arrest, but

with

help

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the help

of social sites people can get news about

surroundings

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the surroundings

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other hand

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the other hand

, it imposes negativities

also

. Primarily, it promotes fake news. Sometimes narcissistic people spread

rumors

gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth

rumours

about debating issues which creates riots in society.

For example

, in Feb- 2020, wrong news was posted regarding NRC /

CAA which

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CAA, which

created problems on roads in Delhi.

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The second point

is health problems due to over usage in certain individuals

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Most youngsters glued to

screen

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the screen

screens

a screen

and using media

all the

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all, the

day which causes issues

such

as depression, weight gain, eye damage, isolation so on.

For instance

, WHO reported, 40% of people suffered from depression due to constant use of social media. To conclude,

although

social networking sites have many negatives globally, positives are

also

many in very profitable ways

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If proper awareness provided,

such

disadvantages could be ameliorated.