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Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that advanced technologies might make the social life of people miserable. I do agree with
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 stronger. Technological inventions like mobile phones make the people’s life comfortable, but it surely has adverse effects. It leads a
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 of people to insomniac and makes few in to depression. The youth does get addicted to the social media and will spend more
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 on it
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 of spending
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 with the family members and friends. Sometimes, it does affect these on their studies as well. Spending
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 on Instagram or Facebook make them lose their concentration on other things. It
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 affects the physical activities of the individual. Usually a regular person do
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 for walking or jogging. But over usage of technologies makes them stick to it, there are a wide variety of games and other activities available in one touch away. It inhibits the people to get into more activities or games where as they will find the pleasure in playing mobile games and other. These will affect their health badly too. So in total, in
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 of inventions do make the people’s life easier, it surely does have some bad effects. So the parents should restrict the over phone usage in their kids and guide them to spend more
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 outside, which will help them to get some fresh air as well as the helps them to communicate with other people in real.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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