You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
Dear Sir,
I am one of the customers of your grocery store. I am writing
this
missive on the subject of an incident happened with me in your market.
Today, I went there to buy some items, but, unfortunately, I slipped on the floor due to the water on the floor. As I have seen, the refrigerator kept in the corner was damaged by dint of that there was some leakage in the freezer from where the water is flowing down on the ground. However
, I got some injuries on
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Thus
, I want to write this
letter to you so that you should take some immediate action for this
.
In addition
, I have some recommendation
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Firstly
, you should put a sign which is easily visible to everyone. For instance
, a big yellow coloured cone shaped
wet floor caution. Add a hyphen
cone-shaped
Also
, keep watching the surveillance cameras on the regular basis to keep you up-to-date so that some instant steps must be taken in these circumstances. At
the end, I request you to repair the fridge immediately before any other disaster happens.
I look forward to receiving your reply and hope that you take my advice seriously. Thank you in advance for considering my perspectives.
Yours faithfully,
Kulbir KaurChange the preposition
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