Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries, which has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?

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few decades, the analysis shows that the
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of the people has been substantially increased compared to the past time.
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trend has been observed in most of the nations across the globe. There are advantages and disadvantages of
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phenomenon. We will discuss the both of these in
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. On one hand, there are
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of people, who support that the longer
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of
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of people is
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beneficial for society.
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The first advantage
is that, their experience and expertise could be followed, grabbed taught to young generations. They could absorb more and more which will indeed helpful for their future.
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, their maturity and actual work could be useful for the enhancement in
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the growth
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, if the scenario continues, more and more innovations and technological advancement will be required for their treatment, because the elders are more vulnerable to disease, which will shrink the growth of other sectors.
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, during recent days, the number of
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people affected by CORONA virus is much greater than younger people.
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, upcoming generations will not get enough chance to showcase their talent and will not get sufficient
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. On top of it, most of the resources will be utilized by
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these groups
of folks and few assets could be utilized by new generations. By
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both the views, from my point of view, longer
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of people is definitely not accepted for the upcoming generations’ growth and
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not suitable for the economy of a country. The
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should not be increased beyond a certain limit.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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