Urban areas expansion has lead to numerous problems. Identify two serious ones and suggest ways that can be done to tackle these two problems.

To begin
, year to year world is developing
,
Accept space
,
so number of big cities are growing. Is it made a new
problems
Suggestion
problem
?
Firstly
, if area of cities will be larger, statistics of
unemploment
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
will grow.
This
problem actually even now. To solve
this
problem
goverments
Suggestion
government
governments
should give more opportunities for people
,
Accept space
,
who haven't got a job. Another solution is that here will be social problems. For
this
reason here some examples like traffic jams, noisy and polluted streets. People can
participete
share in something
participate
participant
on
Suggestion
in
volonteering
tell voluntarily
volunteering
to resolve it.
Foretheremore
in addition
Furthermore
, It can be
catalyzer
Suggestion
a catalyzer
to start using alternative energy. All in all
,
Accept space
,
in my opinion, it is
bad idea
Suggestion
a bad idea
.
Accept space
.
I get used to my city and streets,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think all like
there
of them or themselves
their
childhood places and don't want to change
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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