The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three pie charts illustrate the shifts in the annual consumption by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
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, the
salaries
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of schoolteachers increase slightly,
insurance
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increases
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over the period.
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, payments of other workers decrease over the year, the
expenditure
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of
resources
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of
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on
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books decreases, but annual spending on
furniture
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and
equipment
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increases
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. In 1981, the school spends most of the payment
of
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on
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teachers which is two-fifth of
total
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the total
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expenditure
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. The percentage of other workers’
salaries
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of less than one-
third
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.
Moreover
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,
expenditure
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on
resources
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of books and
furniture
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and
equipment
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less
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is less
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than one-fifth. The lowest
expenditure
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is
insurance
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which is about 2
percent
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per cent
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. In 1991, teachers’
salaries
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,
expenditure
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of
resources
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and
insurance
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increases
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increased
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at a rate of 5%, 5% and 1%, respectively
where
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whereas
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other workers’
salaries
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and spent on
furniture
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and
equipment
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decreases at 6% and 10% respectively. In 2001, the teachers’
salaries
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are less than half, which decreases
5
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by 5
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% as compared to 1991 but
insurance
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expense
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expenses
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increases
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at
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by
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about 5%.
However
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, other workers’
salaries
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and
expenditure
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on
resources
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decrease
,
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but
spend
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spending
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on
furniture
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and
equipment
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increases
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at
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by
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about 18%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, insurance, increases, expenditure, resources, furniture, equipment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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