The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts illustrate the shifts in the annual consumption by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, the
salaries
of schoolteachers increase slightly,
insurance
increases
over the period.
However
, payments of other workers decrease over the year, the
expenditure
of
resources
of
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on
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books decreases, but annual spending on
furniture
and
equipment
increases
. In 1981, the school spends most of the payment
of
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on
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teachers which is two-fifth of
total
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the total
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expenditure
. The percentage of other workers’
salaries
of less than one-
third
.
Moreover
,
expenditure
on
resources
of books and
furniture
and
equipment
less
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is less
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than one-fifth. The lowest
expenditure
is
insurance
which is about 2
percent
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per cent
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. In 1991, teachers’
salaries
,
expenditure
of
resources
and
insurance
increases
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increased
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at a rate of 5%, 5% and 1%, respectively
where
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whereas
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other workers’
salaries
and spent on
furniture
and
equipment
decreases at 6% and 10% respectively. In 2001, the teachers’
salaries
are less than half, which decreases
5
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by 5
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% as compared to 1991 but
insurance
expense
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expenses
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increases
at
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by
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about 5%.
However
, other workers’
salaries
and
expenditure
on
resources
decrease
,
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apply
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but
spend
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spending
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on
furniture
and
equipment
increases
at
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by
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about 18%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, insurance, increases, expenditure, resources, furniture, equipment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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