The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate the shifts in the annual consumption by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, the Linking Words
salaries
of schoolteachers increase slightly, Use synonyms
insurance
Use synonyms
increases
over the period. Use synonyms
However
, payments of other workers decrease over the year, the Linking Words
expenditure
of Use synonyms
resources
Use synonyms
of
books decreases, but annual spending on Change preposition
on
furniture
and Use synonyms
equipment
Use synonyms
increases
.
In 1981, the school spends most of the payment Use synonyms
of
teachers which is two-fifth of Change preposition
on
total
Correct article usage
the total
expenditure
. The percentage of other workers’ Use synonyms
salaries
of less than one-Use synonyms
third
. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
expenditure
on Use synonyms
resources
of books and Use synonyms
furniture
and Use synonyms
equipment
Use synonyms
less
than one-fifth. The lowest Add a missing verb
is less
expenditure
is Use synonyms
insurance
which is about 2 Use synonyms
percent
. In 1991, teachers’ Change the spelling
per cent
salaries
, Use synonyms
expenditure
of Use synonyms
resources
and Use synonyms
insurance
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
increases
at a rate of 5%, 5% and 1%, respectively Wrong verb form
increased
where
other workers’ Correct word choice
whereas
salaries
and spent on Use synonyms
furniture
and Use synonyms
equipment
decreases at 6% and 10% respectively.
In 2001, the teachers’ Use synonyms
salaries
are less than half, which decreasesUse synonyms
5
% as compared to 1991 but Change preposition
by 5
insurance
Use synonyms
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
increases
Use synonyms
at
about 5%. Change preposition
by
However
, other workers’ Linking Words
salaries
and Use synonyms
expenditure
on Use synonyms
resources
decreaseUse synonyms
,
but Remove the comma
apply
spend
on Wrong verb form
spending
furniture
and Use synonyms
equipment
Use synonyms
increases
Use synonyms
at
about 18%.Change preposition
by
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, insurance, increases, expenditure, resources, furniture, equipment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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