The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate the shifts in the annual consumption by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
, the salaries
of schoolteachers increase slightly, insurance
increases
over the period. However
, payments of other workers decrease over the year, the expenditure
of resources
of
books decreases, but annual spending on Change preposition
on
furniture
and equipment
increases
.
In 1981, the school spends most of the payment of
teachers which is two-fifth of Change preposition
on
total
Correct article usage
the total
expenditure
. The percentage of other workers’ salaries
of less than one-third
. Moreover
, expenditure
on resources
of books and furniture
and equipment
less
than one-fifth. The lowest Add a missing verb
is less
expenditure
is insurance
which is about 2 percent
. In 1991, teachers’ Change the spelling
per cent
salaries
, expenditure
of resources
and insurance
increases
at a rate of 5%, 5% and 1%, respectively Wrong verb form
increased
where
other workers’ Correct word choice
whereas
salaries
and spent on furniture
and equipment
decreases at 6% and 10% respectively.
In 2001, the teachers’ salaries
are less than half, which decreases 5
% as compared to 1991 but Change preposition
by 5
insurance
expense
Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
increases
at
about 5%. Change preposition
by
However
, other workers’ salaries
and expenditure
on resources
decrease,
but Remove the comma
apply
spend
on Wrong verb form
spending
furniture
and equipment
increases
at
about 18%.Change preposition
by
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, insurance, increases, expenditure, resources, furniture, equipment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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