Some people believe that success in life depends upon hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both view and give your opinion?

In the modern world people can get a high status by different ways. Some people consider that personal skills

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as hardworking is a main key to profit, whilst others feel that material facilities and good-looking are more prevent. Personally, I think that just a professionalism plays the

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role in the achievement. I intend to delve into both points of view and performed the mine. On the one hand, wealth and appearance take not the

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place in the society.

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, in the country

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full of corruption some rich people believe that they can get a higher position in the company with the help of capital and

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dressing and beauty can be attractive and may have an enormous influence on the progress.

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, the real personal skills and talent became useless in

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kind of world.

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, some people, including me, have the viewpoint which is against the

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one.

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, the inventor of well spread fast food restaurant KFC just because of his ambitious and hardworking character got a tremendous achievement and became a well-known person over the earth.

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example shows how the person without having an enormous amount of money can reach the gain.

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skills and talents take an important part in a successful life. To conclude, the both points of view can exist in a modern community.

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I believe that in the future, just hard labour and determination will be outweigh the wealth.