Government money should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for the general public. To what extent do you agree?

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of sponsoring professional sports and arts, the funding from government should be involved

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the development of sports for students. From my perspective, I oppose

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statement for several

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discussed and elaborated in the following paragraph. It is undeniable that government spend

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a considerable amount

of money on taking place a major sporting event or arts exposition.

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, these expenses are justified because the events not only entertain

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boost the local economy and create more job opportunities.

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, Rugby World Cup 2019 in Japan had generated enormous income by the collaboration with tour agency. They offered a wide variety of travel promotions that including the tickets of

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, accommodations, and the local tourism spots. Meanwhile, the sport events or artistic programs are the opportunities to showcase a country and its capability before the world. The image and culture of a nation can be improved by properly organizing these events. Take ‘ Waka Waka‘ as an example, a well-known theme song of 2010 FIFA in South Africa. It is the combination of traditional African music and modern instruments that has

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to facilitate the world to know more about its culture.

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, those are standing on the opposite of my opinion may claim that sports in schools have neglected in recent years as people attach more importance on the other subjects like mathematics or science. The shortage of funding might hide the talent of students on sports.

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, the training of sport and arts in school are usually basic which means it is unnecessary for advance equipment.

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, the vision of students during early childhood are ambiguous, there is high possibility of

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, all the resources and efforts put in training may go in vain. In conclusion, sporting or arts events are the great platforms to bring people together and to promote the global harmony. Even if, it will be costly and exorbitant, the benefits and profits behind them are far more than its few disadvantages.