Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Online shopping has become the talk of the town now-a-days. There are people both in for and against
this
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form of purchase.
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essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of online purchase and decide on
the better
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the best
option. Our population now-a-days, mostly consists of young people who are either students or working professionals who do not have much time at hand but they do have money to
expend
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. People do not get time to go to the market for shopping due to long working hours. Previously,
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people would ask their family to do the shopping from market for
them but
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them, but
with the advent of nuclear families, there is no one available for running errands for them. So, they are looking for options which are more convenient. Online shopping allows the user not only to browse through a wide variety of a particular
item
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, but
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gives choice of timing for delivery of the purchased
item
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. All you got to have is a smartphone and a strong network.
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, most of the younger generation now buys groceries through app based sites like Amazon, Flipkart, etc. The flip side of online purchase is that, since you do cannot touch and see the
item
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closely, it may be possible that the
item
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may not meet the person's expectations.
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, there are instances when faulty and entirely different products had been delivered to the customer. One more reason that may be
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enlisted, especially
by our older generation is that buying things over the net causes us to lose
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relations that would have developed if we had gone to the market to shop physically.
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my opinion, I would say that purchasing things online is definitely more advantageous than the traditional form of shopping because it is convenient and
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gives us a variety of options.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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