Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

These days, people particularly younger generations are indicating a growing tendency to edible goods sweated with artificial sugar which is intensively detrimental to human

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a primary human right to decide what to consume, I intend to contend that it is somehow the responsibility of

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to discourage people from purchasing harmful

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by deterring strict rules. There are two primary reasons for

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. First of all, the strongest argument in favour of raising the cost of sugary foods and drinks is that of public

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. Snacks and drinks like Coca-Cola or pastry which are high in sugar are responsible for

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ailments as Diabetes, obesity

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high blood pressure and other potentially fatal diseases.

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eating or drinking

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stuff would provide the consumer with pleasure and enjoyment, the inconvenience and cost of treating consequent effects are significant. Rather than neglecting citizens’ diets, taking

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policy by

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and authorities would result in nurturing a healthier society.

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and even more importantly, though, is the fact that implementing

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policy would deliberately shape the younger generation’s future eating habits. Replacing these

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with some natural fruit juice at a lower price which, is subsidised by

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would be a salient example of

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. Having grown up removing

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from their daily diet, people are more likely to continue that lifestyle in their adult lives. Admittedly, continuing

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measure entails offering discounts for healthier commodities with natural glucose. By the way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that

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could play a crucial role in citizen’s

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. Given the

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risks associated with

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trend, I believe that taking

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prohibiting measures against consuming other damaging

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which are high in salt or fat would be justified.