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Convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what degree do you agree or disagree ?

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Pre prepared meal start to gain in front of traditional
food
 and the way how is cooked.I agree with that because nowadays people are very busy and do not have time for cooking but even so I do not think that convenience
food
 will replace traditional one. It is true that convenience meal is easy to prepare and people, especially women, tend to use
this
 because of limited free time but traditional
food
 is much healthier.For some people cooking is a veritable art life they cook with pleasure and I think
that is
 the one reason for which traditional
food
 never disappear.
This
 industry of
food
 restaurant street catering is in increasing and development.There are many festivals of traditional
food
 and many people sustain
this
.
On the other hand
 convenience
food
 seems to be preferred by many companies in their lunch break at the office.Special occasions like anniversary and weddings are marked by conventional
food
.Nowadays people work all day long and do not have time to cook and
this
food
 is very useful for them.In many supermarkets are o lot of dishes pre prepared like soup, meat and they are at a very good price too.I think that
this
 kind of products can be very harmful for our health
this
 can lead to obesity and other problems like heart disease
,
Accept space
,
diabetes, strokes, cancers.A pre packed
food
 contains too much calories and additives. To conclude traditional
food
 always will play an important role in our lives and never will disappear.People understand the importance of traditional
food
 and how
this
 can represent us like a nation.
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