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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater ,is a waste of money . Government must the money in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this situation?

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Governments are the pilots who flight societies planes. They have the choice either to lead the society to success or failure.
Therefore
, governments have to be careful in where they spend the money. They could spend them in
arts
Suggestion
the arts
 or in public services.
Nevertheless some
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Nevertheless, some
 people believe that spending money in
arts
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the arts
 is a waste.
This
 statement is neither completely
wrong nor
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wrong, nor
 completely right. In case,
government
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the government
 has plenty of
many
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
, they have to spend some in
art
 sectors after providing the necessary public services. These services including educational, health care, transportation, electricity, etc. The
art
 presents part of
people life
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the person's life
person's life
a person's life
 that
have
Suggestion
has
 to be fulfilled with musics,
theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
, etc.
Otherwise
,
this
 part will be fulfilled with bad thoughts
such
 as crime, steal, etc.
On the other hand
, in case the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 does not have enough money, they have to give public services the priority. Because without sufficient public services, people will not be happy with any kind of
art
. Who afraid about his
family
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family's
 future will not live the moment. In general,
art
 is
important part
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an important part
 in human lives.
However
, ones
is rarely get
Suggestion
rarely get
are rarely getting
have rarely gotten
have rarely got
 the benefit of arts with absence of the necessary public services.
Therefore
, after providing the public services, governments have to take care about
art
 sectors.
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