Many people believe that social networking sites (e.g. Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and sociaty.

In
this
day and age, it is believed by many that social networking sites have had a bad effect on both people and different communities. It is disagreed that the idea of a negative impact of social sites to some individuals is true. Few positive sides of a social network web will be discussed in details in the following paragraphs in
this
essay.
First
of all, social media sites have linked a lot of different people from different corners of the globe connecting them in a few seconds.
This
opportunity of linking individuals of the world, gave a perfect chance for many to find and connect their friends, relatives and many lost acquaintances which are located in various locations. Many elderly people these days struggle to find their classmates, old friends and previous neighbours and with the help of
this
public media sites they can reach their lost loved ones with the access of the internet just typing their full name.
Th
erefore based o
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Therefore, based
n these facts public chain sites seem to have more positive sides compared to the problems it causes.
Secondly
, networks
such
as Facebook, Instagramm and Linkedln has been comfortably adapted to a business entities. Major companies and enterprises have been using
this
community to reach and to promote their products and services directly to the cell phones of potential customer and for that they do not even have to pay as it is free of charge. LinkedIn,
for example
, is a good tool for recruiting a new employee and leader for a company and
this
system could
also
be used by unemployed individuals. To sum up, after viewing the given issue from various sides it can be concluded that public grid has far more advantageous sides than drawbacks.
Finally
, it is predicted that in the following years more business will be operated and promoted throughout site as Facebook, Instagramm and etc.
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