The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.

The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.
The table compares secondary and high school
teachers
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’ salaries in five
countries
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in 2009.
Overall
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,
while
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teachers
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in Luxembourg were the most well-paid,
teachers
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from Australia were the lowest-paid.
In addition
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, the amount of time it took for a teacher in
Denmark
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to earn the maximum
salary
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was much faster than
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other
countries
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. Secondary and high school
teachers
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in Luxembourg were paid a starting
salary
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of $80,000 a year,
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the figure for
teachers
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in
Denmark
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was significantly lower, at $45,000.
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, the starting
salary
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for an inexperienced teacher in other
countries
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stood at around $30,000.
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,
teachers
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with at least 15 years of experience in Luxembourg earned up to $119,000 a year,
while
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teachers
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in
Denmark
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and Japan with the same level of experience only made salaries of $54,000 and $65,000 respectively. Meanwhile, Australian and Korean
teachers
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with at least 15
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experience
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of experience
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were paid the lowest salaries, at $48,000 a year.
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worth noting is that it only took
teachers
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in Australia and
Denmark
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less than 10 years to receive their maximum
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,
while
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teachers
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in the other
countries
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had to wait for at least 30 years.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, teachers, denmark, salary with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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