Some people suggest that it is better for children to be brought up by the whole family including uncles, aunts and grandparents, rather than just the parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.

The

raising

advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status

rising

trend of modern lifestyle and its effects on children’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

, has led to the question whether it is helpful for children to live in a joint family or not? In my opinion, attention to the advantages of

this

lifestyle, without counting their disadvantages is simplistic. So, I do believe that raising children in a joint family is like a double-edge sword, which could have a lot harms and benefits for children simultaneously. A number of arguments surrounded my opinion. On the one hand, a group of psychologists

believe

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that joint families could have a lot of advantages for both children and their parents.

Firstly

, children have the opportunity to connect to their roots and know their family

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tree

there

. It would able them to know themselves more easily in the word.

Secondly

, they can learn how to behave with other genders, how respect

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for

them, and how express their feelings and opinions for their grandparents, aunts, uncles, etc.

thirdly

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Thirdly

, the risk of spending their leisure time on unhealthy entertainments is decreased considerably, and they get more opportunity to have healthy entertainments,

such

as listen to their grandparent’s stories, play with their cousins. It is

also

worth recalling that, their parents could focus on their job, without being concerned about their children.

On the other hand

, if

this

interaction between children’s parents and their grandparents do not manage well, it would cause some harmful effects on children.

For example

, if family members could not understand well each other, the rate of conflicts is increased and the risk of children’s mental problems is increased

consequently

. To give another example, in joint

family children

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family, children

do not have enough time to spend with

theirself

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their self

, so, their privacy is complacent. In conclusion, raising children in a joint family

have

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has

a lot of harms and benefits simultaneously,

thus

, highlighting

this

lifestyle’s principles and manage well the interaction between the family members, could decrease the disadvantages and increase advantages for children.