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Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Throughout the past few decades,
music
 has been recognized as a unique language by everyone, and it is the soul of a universal. In
this
 regard, while some people claim that
music
 is just
entertainment
, others are of the opinion that
music
 has various functions for society. I believe that
music
 can boost relationships as well as hope and friendship between people. On the one hand, it is argued that
music
 is a global language and can connect people to gather together regardless of their cultural background or age. In
this
 regard, people from different generations can share the same passion for the same song.
For example
, when society encounters a tough situation or grave problem
such
 as
this
 pandemic virus that put many people around the world in a stressful condition, people can share their hope and sending positive energy to another by singing a particular song.
Furthermore
,
music
 is not only the best source of
entertainment but
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entertainment, but
also
 can have
further
 purposes. Today, many charities are using
music
 to provide money and aid for poor people.
For example
, it can be seen all around the world substantial sums of money are raised for charity by holding a live concert.
On the other hand
,
music
 is the best source of
entertainment
 and can put people in different moods. When people come home after a hectic day, they need some fun and
entertainment
, so they play
music
, and it calms them and feels relaxed.
Also
,
music
 is used by many people to change their mood. If they felt sad or frustrated, playing
music
 would give them energy and make them feel better. Only in
this
 way can some people get energy and feel cheerful.
Furthermore
,
music
 as
entertainment
 can boost people’s enthusiasm.
Music
 is an intrinsic part of every party and ceremony. It is hard to imagine a party without some
music
. There is mountain scientific evidence that shows
music
 can influence people’s minds, and it can increase brain activities. In conclusion,
although
 in recent years
music mainly
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music, mainly
 been related to
entertainment
, I believe that
music
 is a unique language that can be understood by everybody. Having come from people’s souls,
music
 able to improve the relationship between people.
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