Many countries spend large amounts of money on preparing competitors in major world sporting events such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup. Instead, this money can be spent on encouraging children to take up sports at a young age.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of countries spend huge amount of payments on conducting competitions in events
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as the Olympic and football world cup games. But, some peoples believe
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they should invest
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amount to motivate children to take up sports at a small age. In
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essay I would like to express my opinion with suitable example. To start with,
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it is really good thought, to encourage children to take up sports at a young age and I completely agree with that as it is a good thing because if we motivate them in young age
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only we can get great players. But, what is the point
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when they can't represent their county. Due to which they will start losing the interest as well.
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, we spend a
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of amount on children in motivating them to play sports, but as they grow up and there is no competition, they will loss interest of continuing it as they don't have any objective left.
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,
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event
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conducted by countries is not only for one objective. It has many objectives behind it,
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it encourages players from your
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and another
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to come together and represent their home
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. It
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also help
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also helps
has also helped
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country to increase in
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country to increase
employment as well as an increase in tourism. It
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benefits a
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as it
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bring in foreign currency.
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country
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a country
who host Olympic games they do spend a
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for the
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also allow
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also allows
them to earn back by an increase in peoples flying to that
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to see the
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which automatically increases in inflow of foreign currency. To summarize, we should encourage teens to play games, but having sports affair can
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help in generating capital which can be used for kids. So I disagree that there should be no
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as having events benefit
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, raise in jobs, rise in cash flow and it
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help in making good relation with other countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • grassroots sports
  • lifelong love for physical activity
  • physical well-being
  • teamwork
  • discipline
  • perseverance
  • nurture potential talent
  • healthier societies
  • accessibility
  • inclusivity
  • national pride
  • unity
  • economic boost
  • global recognition
  • balanced approach
  • elite sports
  • funding
  • long-term benefits
  • exposure to sports
  • youth sports
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