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Marathi Nations should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster do you agree or disagree with the statement

#marathi #nations #countries #relief #disaster
Some people think that
majority
Suggestion
the majority
 of students go to university while others are of the opinion studying in a university should be a universal right. In my personal opinion, there is some truth in both views as well as reasons will be given below. In terms of studying some subjects like medicine, engineering or education, students have to study for a long time. That’s why working as these types of job require people who are qualified specialists. People who want to work as a doctor or other workers of medicine should study at least 6 years in the university of medicine.
Moreover
, people who want to become a qualified teacher, they should gain knowledge for many years, because they can't be competent teacher even if they practice with children for many years. What I am trying to say is carrying out career as these kind of job may be extremely difficult,
however
 they earn sufficiently enough money. When it comes to opinions of opponents, they believe and many of them experienced that if you desire to work as a mechanics together with technicians, you should be busy with training on your profession, because these professions do not demand any sorts of diploma or other documents. I mean they may be good at these jobs if they attempt to work with qualified workers. Based on different explained views, the solid conclusion can be drawn that, in many kinds of professions, employers do not take your diploma into consideration while others highly demand the diploma as well as, the two crucial types of gaining knowledge never get lost.
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