Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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learning at home or school is better has sparked a heated debate. While home tutoring offer better protection with individual learning and opportunities for family to bond, schools have students with a variety of social backgrounds and superior range of introduces two alternatives
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material. Both of these views will be examined before a conclusion is reached.be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite