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In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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in the future survive on the
earth
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 will be difficult for various reasons.Due to the fact
peoplesruin
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 and destroy all
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of
 the world.Because of
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 government highlights much
money
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 for exploring and find live on the other planets.
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In
 people, have always interested in
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Is there life on
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
planet
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 that
our
plural of "I"
we
 now?And on
such
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 case it is not a pity to spend
money
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 and
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
. I fully agree with that spend more
money
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 on researching life on
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 planets where no more that three people have ever set foot.Certainly
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equipment for
located
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locating
 a life, examine the
earth
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 and sand
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analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 the air and so on very expensive. From another point of view
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for our
planet
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in addition
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, to
ptoblema
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 with natural problems and there is a human threat.
natural
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Natural
 problems
such
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 as tsunami
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earthquake
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huracane
a severe tropical cyclone usually with heavy rains and winds moving a 73-136 knots (12 on the Beaufort scale)
hurricanes
hurricane
 and global warming can contribute us leave the
earth
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we force ourselves to leave our native land because we do everything for it.
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we trash everywhere, throw waste into the sea and so on.But in order to force
themselves
objective case of they
them
 to spend a lot of
money
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We can just save our
planet
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 and live on without spending a cent.But we can investigate
money
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 to survey other planets for
other
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the other planet
planet
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 for fun. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 want to say lets not force the
earth
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 to throw us out
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but save it and keep
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money
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the money
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