In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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in the future survive on the
earth
will be difficult for various reasons.Due to the fact
peoplesruin
and destroy all
on
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of
the world.Because of
this
government highlights much
money
for exploring and find live on the other planets.
For
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In
people, have always interested in
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Is there life on
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
planet
that
our
plural of "I"
we
now?And on
such
case it is not a pity to spend
money
and
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
. I fully agree with that spend more
money
on researching life on
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
planets where no more that three people have ever set foot.Certainly
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equipment for
located
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locating
a life, examine the
earth
and sand
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analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
the air and so on very expensive. From another point of view
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,
for our
planet
,
in addition
, to
ptoblema
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
with natural problems and there is a human threat.
natural
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Natural
problems
such
as tsunami
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earthquake
,
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,
huracane
a severe tropical cyclone usually with heavy rains and winds moving a 73-136 knots (12 on the Beaufort scale)
hurricanes
hurricane
and global warming can contribute us leave the
earth
.
On the other hand
,
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,
we force ourselves to leave our native land because we do everything for it.
For example
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we trash everywhere, throw waste into the sea and so on.But in order to force
themselves
objective case of they
them
to spend a lot of
money
.
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.
We can just save our
planet
and live on without spending a cent.But we can investigate
money
to survey other planets for
other
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the other planet
planet
for fun. In conclusion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
want to say lets not force the
earth
to throw us out
,
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but save it and keep
money
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the money
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