some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Child
education
is constantly heating topic of our society.From the view point
of some individuals, folks should educate their a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
child
with Suggestion
children
sense
of patriotism and Suggestion
a sense
selflessnes
while others hold the quality of unselfish concern for the welfare of others
selflessness
a
opinion that Suggestion
an
school
plays an essential role to make youngsters feel as an incresible
part of society.As a supporter of former view parents are more responsible for beyond belief or understanding
incredible
child
education
.
On the one hand parents are
often considered as Suggestion
hand, parents are
role model
for their offspring and they are responsible for their future.To clarify children spend Suggestion
a role model
role models
significant proportion
of time with their folks and always tries to act like them, for Suggestion
a significant proportion
this
reason parents
should behave themselves appropriateAccept comma addition
reason, parents
,
because future of Accept space
,
child
rooted in parents behaviour.Furthermore young
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rooky
full of zest or vigor
racy
child
fail
to understand Suggestion
fails
outside world
without the constructive advice of parents.Suggestion
the outside world
Chinase
peoples are a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
brilliant example
for Suggestion
brilliant examples
a brilliant example
this
.In every Chinase
familya native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
,
youngsters have to pay respect to older family members and Accept space
,
education
of child
considered as most essential task
of Suggestion
the most essential task
family
.Suggestion
the family
As a result
of decent attention to child
education
most Chinase
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
grown
up to be well mannered citizen.
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have grown
are grown
On the other hand
, school
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the school
also
plays subsential
role in every Suggestion
plays a substantial
plays substantial
school
students
life.Because Suggestion
student
students'
student's
their
acquire basic people in general
they
knowlde
from a connecting point at which several lines come together
node
school enviroment
and Suggestion
the school environment
school environment
school
education
paves a way for their further
life.It is undeniable that educated peoples
always prove to be Suggestion
people
decent person
and contributes to Suggestion
a decent person
decent people
flourishment
of society which they live.Their selfish characteristics lead them to prioritize the needs of others over their own.
Overall, admittedly school
utterly important to create better personnels who can sacrifice themselves but
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themselves, but
parental guide
provide will provide them with long term benefit.Suggestion
a parental guide
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