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Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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Several cities of the world are presently facing an extreme housing deficiency.
Large
Suggestion
The largest
number
 of
migration
Suggestion
migratory
 and not having adequate
construction
 skilled people are the major reason behind
this
. By limiting the
number
 of migrants and diverting
youth
 more towards
construction education
Accept comma addition
construction, education
 looks like viable solutions. Developed countries around the globe are welcoming more and more migrants currently than ever before. Everyone prefers moving to developed cities always for availability of jobs and
better future
Suggestion
a better future
, but the country must have a pre-plan about housing before letting people in else there will be housing
shortage
. Take Canada as an example where they will have taken 2 million migrants in
last
 3 year and everyone moves in major cities like Toronto and Vancouver which created a major housing
shortage
. Another reason is not having enough
construction
 skilled people since
youth
 is more inclined towards subjects like business and economics. It is not possible to match the housing demand with the pace of increased population if there is
shortage
Suggestion
a shortage
 of skilled people in
construction
. Restricting the
number
 of migrants can be a solution to the housing
shortage
. A country should
first
 look at their housing system and
then
 invite the
number
 of people they can accommodate. Recently, Australia closed the door for immigrant for major cities like Sydney and Melbourne because of the housing
shortage
. Another solution can be pushing
youth
 more to study
construction
. Setting an attractive wage for
construction
 worker can attract
youth
 to study and pursue their career in
construction
. To conclude, no doubt housing
shortage
 is one of the major problems, many cities are facing, but by limiting the immigrant and pushing
youth
 to
construction
 studies can help to solve the problem.
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