A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by the people while others argue that humans must employ to satisfy their various needs, including for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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exploitation of animal ought to reconsider. As they are living beings capable of feelings and relationships. They deserve much respect to achieve Linking Words
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vegetarianism may not suite everyone. It is certainly possible to cut down on meat consumption or make more ethical choices. In medical research too, the aim should be to reduce animal use, refine technologies and to replace them with other means. Given the range of alternatives available, the treatment of animals can no longer justified.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite