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The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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In recent years,
knowledge
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 has been made directly accessible for free globally via the Internet through electronic gadgets
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 as computers and smartphones.
Although
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 people can get huge amount of data in a short time using search engines, there are
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 some drawbacks to be taken into account. On the
one
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 hand, there are a number of benefits of using the Internet as a source of
knowledge
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.
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, the world wide web provides its users with an easy access to enormous amounts of information unlike libraries. A student,
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, does a school project while sitting at home without the need to go to a nearby library.
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, using the Internet is advantageous because people can simply use search engines like Google to get the data they need in a short time.
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 advantage helps them save time as well as effort.
On the other hand
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,
one
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 problem of using the Internet is that potentially breaks down. To illustrate
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, technology failure happens suddenly which can cause serious problems if you are fully dependent on the web.
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, books are more reliable if
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 is used to reading them. Another possible issue is the false information you might get online. Many forums and websites,
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, provide huge amounts of data,
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 material,
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, there is no fact checking.
As a result
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, despite the merits of technological devices,
one
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 should not be fully dependent on them. In conclusion, while using the Internet to get
knowledge
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 can have many positive aspects, it can
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 have disadvantages
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 as inaccurate
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 and technology failure.
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