Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a wast of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement.

Spending our free time is the most important one in our life successful people will spend in a good way.

Although

, many people believe that investing in music and theatre are a waste of money. I agree with

this

statement to a large extend for some reason. My position is argued

further

with the explanation. Out of all the reasons, the foremost one is the library. With that investment if we build a huge library that will be grateful for education everyone will gain some knowledge, through that we can avoid unemployment. To add to

this

in our nation, there are many poor people are living not having enough money to buy books itself for them it will be a great opportunity to learn with free of cost.

Additionally

, the government can build many parks where people will get physically fit and we can avoid many health problems due to obesity.

Moreover kids

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Moreover, kids

will have some space to play outdoor games

instead

of playing inside the house with mobile phones.

For instance

, if anybody visits park regularly, we can have more neighbourhood friends.

However

, I would not overlook the other side too.

To begin

with, music and theatre are the best entertainment for relax and stress free.

Also we

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Also, we

can have some nice time to spend with family, but it's quite expensive not affordable for everybody.

Thus

, to conclude the discussion, it can

finally

be said

finally

said that

although

there are few benefits of music and theatre but not essential for life. I believe having a library and park will give physical and mental strength which mandatory for mankind.