A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited

Theer
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There
has been lots of debates about animal rights in different societies over
last decade
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the last decade
and sometimes we watch or hear from
media
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the media
that a group of people are protesting in each corner of the world to protect animal rights. Some people believed that animals should not be exploited ad should be treated fairly by
human being
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human beings
a human being
, while some others point that human needs are more important and people should be allowed to use animals for their different purposes. The following essay
will be discuss
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will be discussed
both views in details, but in my opinion, I believed that animals can be used as the source of
food
or to assist human beings in the
proportinate
being in due proportion
proportionate
way and human should treat them properly. As a God creature, animals live and they have the same feelings like humans do, like pain, suffering,
frustation
the feeling that accompanies an experience of being thwarted in attaining your goals
frustration
, happiness, etc. In favour of securing the same rights as humans, some claim that animals should be treated in a moral and ethical way. People must not use animals for their necessity.
For instance
, using animals for experiments, using them for
entertainment business
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entertainment, business
, killing them for foods or making clothes and many others is inhuman. They
consequently
require to stop slaughtering sheep and cows,
for instance
, simply to provision eatable meat. They
additionally
argue that animals are living
craetures
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
creatures
and should enjoy their lives in peace. In several cases, it has been reported that some of the animals
was treated
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were treated
poorly by their masters, though they had been exploited heavily and made them sick or injured. These activities not only hurt the
animals but
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animals, but
also
may destroy the balance of nature. In
this
case, people with
point
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a point
of view believe that exploitation and violence in animals are cruel behaviour.
In contrast
, some people argue that animals are created to fulfil human needs. It is undeniable that mankind needs the
assistant
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assistance
of animals in various
kind
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kinds
of ways.
Firstly
, some animal are needed by humans to assist them in producing and providing foods. In many countries, cows, buffalos or horses are used by farmers to cultivate their farming areas, and some dairy
farms
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farm
animals
such
as chicken and sheep are slaughtered for their
meats
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meat
. Without the existence of these animals, there would be humanity issues about the lack of
food
supplies and starvation for mankind.
Secondly
, some animals are used in certain scientific experiments or medical testing for the sake of humanity. Several new drugs are being tested in some mice or monkeys before they are being tested on human beings.
Although
it might seem as inhuman act, but these experiments have saved thousands of human lives. According to most of the
history
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historical
historic
documents, the human has employed animals to have a better life from the
tima
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
that
civilisation
a society in an advanced state of social development (e.g., with complex legal and political and religious organizations)
civilization
has come
to
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into
existence. In fact, the skin of animals has been considered as the
first
material for clothing industry and human has used the meat as
source
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a source
of nutritious
food
. They can provide human nutrition, it is suspicious that humans may survive by merely rely on vegetable sources of
food
even though
this
is not impossible. In conclusion, people have different opinion about the exploitation of animals. Some people agree with the
statement but
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statement, but
other disagree with it. In my opinion, I think the employment or the usage of animals to help human beings is not a problem, as long as we used them in a
proportinate
being in due proportion
proportionate
way. I agree that animals deserve to be treated
well but
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well, but
it does not mean that they must be treated as equal as humans.
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