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Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Undoubtedly,
technology
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 is rising at a devastating rate. Though, few humans are negatively
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
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technology while,
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technology, while
 others have a positive perspective towards it.
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, I will illustrate both views and give an opinion in appending paragraphs. Commencing it with, adverse effects of
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. Having a
technology
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 in your hand makes you lethargic.
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, with the experience of
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, humans
are not preferring
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do not prefer
don't prefer
 to put a single load on their mind, which makes their creativeness and cognitive abilities slow down or even completely shut down.
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,
internet
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the internet
 is widely used for finding answers, due to which students are not even trying to find answers by their self. Turning over a side,
technology
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 comes with fruitful benefits too. In 2020
technology
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 is considering a number one source of providing entertainment and happiness, because too many comedy shows, reality shows are broadcasting and can be seen with a help of
technology
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. Moving
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,
ease
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the ease
 of life can be observed when
technology
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 came, it saves your time and lets you do
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 work. To illustrate, TRP of shows
are increasing
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is increasing
 substantially.
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, we can make a call in every nook and corner of the world rather than sending a pigeon.
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, we don’t need to roam a market for hours to purchase a single item.
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, it is solved by window shopping and Jeff Bezos is a world richest man due to e-store. To conclude, every aspect has its pros and cons,
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this
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 has too.
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, I firmly believe that we are growing only due to rising of
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.

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