Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have responsibility to monitor whatever their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Obesity in

younger generation

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the younger generation

a younger generation

is a crucial issue prevailing in Australia since

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preventable disease has covered two

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of

population

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the population

of children living in Australia.

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, it is suggested that it is

prime responsibilty

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the prime responsibility

prime responsibility

a prime responsibility

prime responsibilities

of schools to keep an eye on the intake of food consumed as well as the physical

exercise

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done by students. In

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essay, I will completely disagree with

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proposition.

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, the main reason why Australian schools are not accountable for children's food intake and

exercise

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because it is not their job to do so; rather it is the duty of parents to behold the activities of their kids. Schools are mainly responsible for educating students, and they can certainly educate their students on the value of nutrition and

exercise

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. Still keeping an eye on how much they eat and

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is not domain of schools. It is

core responsibilty

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a core responsibility

core responsibility

the core responsibility

core responsibilities

of parents.

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, It is far too invasive for a

teacher

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to ask

student

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students

a student

about what they have been eating and how much they have been exercising. It may lead to all sorts of problems among

teacher

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, students and parents. In short, parents are responsible for raising their children healthily and schools should focus on educating them. Another reason why schools should not interfere with children's diet and

exercise

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schedule is because it may not only leave an impression of profound insult in front of

whole class

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the whole class

, but

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may encourage other peers to promote bullying if a

teacher

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is compelled

to inquire

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to inquire into such

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habits. Even, if a student is obese, a

teacher

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should not reference in the classroom. To conclude,

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essay discussed that observing students' eating habits and

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regime is not schools' role, rather, it is

fundamental duty

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a fundamental duty

the fundamental duty

of parents. So, I completely disagree with

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suggestion that monitoring students' eating and

exercise

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habits is the duty of schools.