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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#companies #employees #work #home #development
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At the present period of
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, advance of technology enables numerous opportunities, so makes easy working from
home
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 for many people. I think, despite the fact that,
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 has a lot of advantages for either employer or employees, the disadvantages shouldn’t be neglected. One of the main pros of working from
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 is saving
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 which
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time, which
ve to waste by commuting. Additional to
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, people can get tasks done at their
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’s comfort without thinking of traffic or other problems and being stressed. Working from
home
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 provide flexible working hours and it enables people to spend more
time
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 with their family especially with their kids. And when it comes to employers, they can run their business without any charges,
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 as office costs, as well travel and food expenses if they provide these services for their workers. But working from
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 might have
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 some negative effects on people, so they could lose self-control, discipline or motivation easily when performing their
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 tasks and they might put their tasks off till deadline. Apart from that, I think, going to
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, spending
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 with co-workers have good impacts on people in terms of socialization. As well, there are some fields of works require eye to eye contact with a customer or patient, they cannot
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 from
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 in any way. In the conclusion, I think everything depends on the type of company, job and circumstances. But I would prefer to
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 from
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, despite the fact that, it has some drawbacks as working from
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 enable us to manage our
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, how we want and spend more
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 with our family.
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