Some people suggest that it is better for children to be brought up by the whole family including uncles, aunts and grandparents, rather than just the parents.

In order to raise children, the process of them being brought up is one of the paramount factors to be considered. Some believe that it is preferable for the parents to raise their children with their own hands.

However

, it is argued that it would be better if other family

members including

Accept comma addition

members, including

grandparents or aunts and uncles help bring up the children. From my perspective, it is more advantageous for the children if they were raised by their parents, yet they are some positive sides of being brought up by relatives. Certainly, the

way

we live changes throughout time and people from different generations tend to have alternative ways of teaching the kids. Some methods of teaching and punishments of people from older generations might not be an effective process.

For instance

, when a child scored badly on the exam, the older sibling would make the kids do the writing lines punishment.

However

, writing lines would not directly tackle the cause of the problem since children today heavily rely on games and social media on their phones.

Therefore

, having a restriction in access to their phone would be the best solution to preventing the problem from happening again.

Nevertheless

, living in an extended family would provide different points of view to the child and allows them to learn to live with people other than their parents. Grandparents, uncles, and aunts obviously have distinct experiences and wisdom

form

a giver or sender

from

their parents;

therefore

, the

way

they teach would be different. As a consequence,

this

influences the children to have a wider view of the

world

. Exposing themselves to a variety of people and accepting what their relatives taught could contribute to being an open-minded person. All in all, being open-minded is a significant factor of surviving in the real

world

which could be learned by staying with older generation relatives.

However

, the

world

is changing rapidly and parents should be the one who brings up their child since parents know the best

way

to deal with the modern problem.

Although

seniors have more experience, without the understanding in the current

world

, it is complicated for them to teach the kids in the right

way

.